When I woke up this morning I ate breakfast, then  I showered. I went to the art academy after. We had a folding paper art activity. Then, I  went home with my mom. My mom bought some chickens for me. When I finished eating chickens, I  did my homework. Then, I studied English. When I finished it, I went to my Math academy. I studied Math and slept so I could have enough energy for the next day.

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