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Homework(Write about your experience when you wnet to the apuarioum)
작성자 : man*** · 2016-01-22
I go to apuarioum.
I feel fun and amazing.
It is so~~~fantastic.Beacuse first I see very big whale.
It is very wonderful.The whale swim free.so I like very much.
And next I see penguin. They are very cute.They sang together.
And The spread the water for me.It is very good expericence.
If you have a time,you go to the apuarium.you will be fun.
I feel fun and amazing.
It is so~~~fantastic.Beacuse first I see very big whale.
It is very wonderful.The whale swim free.so I like very much.
And next I see penguin. They are very cute.They sang together.
And The spread the water for me.It is very good expericence.
If you have a time,you go to the apuarium.you will be fun.
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It was fun and amazing.
It was so fantastic because of different things. First, I saw a very big whale.
It was very wonderful.The whale swam freely in the water and liked it very much.
Next, I saw some penguins. They were very cute. They sang together and they were spreading the water for me. It was a very good expericence.
If you have time, go to the aquarium. You will definitely enjoy.
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