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How do adults and teenagers think differently?

작성자 : mad***   ·   2016-01-21

We can notice that adults and teenagers think differently from their behavior. Adults have ability to control and curb their feeling such as anger, excitment, tension et cetera. However, teenagers cannot control their feeling well as adults. In other words, they just behave how do they feel and they act extremely.

Also, it is different that adults may thinking more positively and wisely than teenagers. The reason is because, in case of teenagers, they do not have many experience and tips because they lived for short period. But, adults have useful tips and many bevaior so, they can think wisely and positively.

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We can notice that adults and teenagers think differently from their behavior. Adults have the ability to control and curb their feeling such as anger, excitement, tension, et cetera. However, teenagers cannot control their feelings as well as adults. In other words, they just behave based on how they feel and they act extremely.


Another difference is adults tend to think more positively and wisely than teenagers. The reason is because, in case of teenagers, they do not have many experience and tips because they lived for a shorter period. But, adults have useful tips and much experience so, they can think wisely and positively.

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