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작성자 : yoo*** · 2016-01-21
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in the winter,one ofthe best that we can play something is sport. we can play everything with people. although itis very cold, we endure this cold with sports. we can make the snowman. we are able to ride a ski.we thank for the winter. because we just enjoy the winter.
==> In winter, one of the best things that we can do is to play sports. We can play anything with people. Although, it is very cold. We can endure it. We can make a snowman, ride a ski. We are thank you that it's winter because we are enjoying it.
THINGS TO IMPROVE:
> Capitalization - make sure to capitalize the first letter of the sentence
> Spacing - put a space at the end of the period
> Sentence construction - you have to be very careful in constructing your sentences, follow the grammar rules that you have learned
Hi, Bail! Thank you so much for doing your homework. I liked it and you did well. Please take note of the corrections that I made for you. I'm glad that you are enjoying winter. Have a great weekend!
