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작성자 : mar*** · 2016-01-22
The thing that I really want to do is,
First, going to jeju island is my favorite dream.
I haven't been there after I had been borned.
Second, I want to go to Tokyo.
I really like anime like dragon ball super, Tokyo is the best place that I can excite with anime.
Third, I want to be a Top 50 in Sahmyook Middle School.
I am going to enter in Sahmyook, and I know it is hard to study in there,but I want to be Top 50.
Fourth, saving 100thousond dollars.
I am quite young, however I think I have to save money.
Fifth, buying 3DS.
I had played pokemon black2,however I wasn't able to play next version because I didn't have 3DS, so I want to buy 3DS.
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In not less than 5 sentences, write an essay about the things you would like to happen this 2016.
The things that I really want to do are,
First, to go to Jeju island is my greatest dream.
I haven't been there after since I was born. Second, I want to go to Tokyo.
I really like anime like dragon ball super, Tokyo is the best place for anime fans. Third, I want to be in one of the Top 50 Middle Schools in Korea, Sahmyook Middle School.
I am about to enter in Sahmyook Middle School, I know it is difficult to study in there, but I want to be in the top performing Middle Schools.
Fourth, saving 100 thousand dollars.
Though I am quite young, I think I have to start saving money.
Fifth, I would like to buy a 3DS.
I had played pokemon black2, however I wasn't able to play the next version because I didn't have a 3DS, so I want to buy a 3DS.
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