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Write something about my favorite musician.

작성자 : 197***   ·   2016-01-20

My favorite musician is Beatles.
Beatles is made of 5 man.
I like them beacause of them music.
Bye!

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My favorite music band  is The Beatles.
The Beatles is a rock band with 5 members.
I like them because of their music.

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