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작성자 : lov*** · 2016-01-20
<If I Were a Teacher How Will I Punish My Student's Wrongding?>
If it is first time i will give student another chance.
If it is second time i will talk to the student privately
If it is first time i will give student another chance.
If it is second time i will talk to the student privately
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STUDENT: If it is first time i will give student another chance.
CORRECT: If it is the first time I will give my student another chance.
EXPLANATION:
a. We put the definite article THE on adjectives that show sequence like FIRST, LAST and sometimes, on NEXT.
b. The pronoun I is always capitalized.
c. Since we are talking about YOUR students, we need to make it clear that we are talking about them by putting possessives.
STUDENT: If it is second time i will talk to the student privately
CORRECT: If it is the second time I will talk to the student privately.
Good job, Elsa! I appreciate your effort in writing down even the question. You made it easier for me to figure out what you wrote about.
- Teacher Macy