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Homework(Write the sentences about your experience in the farm)
작성자 : man*** · 2016-01-20
It was so fun.
Beause I can play wity animals.
But something is scared.
The dog is realy big.And dog is bark with large sound.
And then when I go outside at farm,I open the gate.
The chicken escape at farm.my parent and aunt grandmother steer the chickens.
I'm sorry to my parent and aunt grandmother.
But somethig is fun!
Beause I can play wity animals.
But something is scared.
The dog is realy big.And dog is bark with large sound.
And then when I go outside at farm,I open the gate.
The chicken escape at farm.my parent and aunt grandmother steer the chickens.
I'm sorry to my parent and aunt grandmother.
But somethig is fun!
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It was so fun because I was able to play with animals.
But, something got me scared.
The dog was realy big and it barked loudly. I went outside. Then, when I opened the gate, the chicken had escaped. My parents, my aunt, and my grandmother tried to catch the chicken.
I'm sorry to my parents, my aunt, and my grandmother.
All in all, it was still a fun day.
Note: Be careful of your verb tenses.