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Diary about England
작성자 : mad*** · 2016-01-19
<England>
Today, I went to the England. When I arrived there, I notice many tall towers, big statue, and huge facilities.
The first place that I visted in the England was a huge clock tower named "Big Ben" located at England Assembly Hall. The modern and kind of charming style of "Big Ben" looks great.
Secondly, I also visted at theme park named Altontowers. Main purpose of visting there was to ride many rides. However, it was available to using spa and waterpark services.
When it was time to go back to our country-Korea, I felt the loss because, I want to tour England more. Anyway, England espacilally London-the captital of England was fascinating, huge, surprising and magnificent! If I have time to visit there, I wish I could.
Today, I went to the England. When I arrived there, I notice many tall towers, big statue, and huge facilities.
The first place that I visted in the England was a huge clock tower named "Big Ben" located at England Assembly Hall. The modern and kind of charming style of "Big Ben" looks great.
Secondly, I also visted at theme park named Altontowers. Main purpose of visting there was to ride many rides. However, it was available to using spa and waterpark services.
When it was time to go back to our country-Korea, I felt the loss because, I want to tour England more. Anyway, England espacilally London-the captital of England was fascinating, huge, surprising and magnificent! If I have time to visit there, I wish I could.
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<England>
Today, I went tothe England. When I arrived there, I noticed many tall towers, big statues, and huge facilities.
The first place that I visited there was a huge clock tower named "Big Ben", located at the England Assembly Hall. The modern and kind of charming style of "Big Ben" looks great.
Second, I also visited the theme park named Altontowers. My main purpose of visiting there was to ride many rides. However, the spa and waterpark services were available so I tried it instead.
When it was time to go back to our country, Korea, I felt the loss because, I wanted to tour England more. Anyway, England especially London; the captital of England was fascinating, huge, surprising and magnificent! If I have time to visit there, I wish I could.
Today, I went to
The first place that I visited there was a huge clock tower named "Big Ben", located at the England Assembly Hall. The modern and kind of charming style of "Big Ben" looks great.
Second, I also visited the theme park named Altontowers. My main purpose of visiting there was to ride many rides. However, the spa and waterpark services were available so I tried it instead.
When it was time to go back to our country, Korea, I felt the loss because, I wanted to tour England more. Anyway, England especially London; the captital of England was fascinating, huge, surprising and magnificent! If I have time to visit there, I wish I could.