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작성자 : chr*** · 2016-01-19
Earthquake
WHen earthquake comes, we have to go under to some things like table.
And if we are outside now, we must not go near the building.
If we are in building, we must not use elevater and use starirs.
And we always have to prepare to the earthquakes.
WHen earthquake comes, we have to go under to some things like table.
And if we are outside now, we must not go near the building.
If we are in building, we must not use elevater and use starirs.
And we always have to prepare to the earthquakes.
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CORRECTION/S:
*Earthquake:
1. When earthquake comes and you're in a building, you have to keep calm and look for a table where you can hide.
2. If you are outside, avoid going near the damaged establishments. Instead, look for a safe place where you can stay in.
3. Be always informed and prepared about whatever calamities that would come.
Thank you, Chris!