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"Love at First Sight" is not Real.
작성자 : mad*** · 2016-01-12
I think that love at first sight is not real for these two reasons.
Firstly, "love at first sight" is a phrase that is little bit exaggerate. It cannot be true that people can love each other at the first sight although they did not talk each other. Because, just seeing without talking cannot be the way to know others personaility.
Second of all, people's mind can always change.
That's why I think that love at first sight is not real.
Firstly, "love at first sight" is a phrase that is little bit exaggerate. It cannot be true that people can love each other at the first sight although they did not talk each other. Because, just seeing without talking cannot be the way to know others personaility.
Second of all, people's mind can always change.
That's why I think that love at first sight is not real.
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I think that love at first sight is not real for these two reasons:
Firstly, "love at first sight" is a phrase that is a little bit exaggerated. It cannot be true that people can love each other at the first sight although they did not talk to each other. Because, just seeing without talking cannot be the way to know other people's personality.
Secondly, people's mind can always change.
That's why I think that love at first sight is not real.
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