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homework to teacher cyan

작성자 : sky***   ·   2016-01-08

When was the last time you lied to someone?
Well, it wasn't a big lie but I lied to my sister that I would give her 70 percent of my money in my will. Teacher Cyan says she lied to her husband that she didn't love him anymore, because he was mean to her. I wanted to throw the christmas tree in his face but she said it was 7feet tall so too bad. :( On the good side, there was a santa small enough to throw. :)

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Chloe: Teacher Cyan says she lied to her husband that she didn't love him anymore, because he was mean to her.
Correction: Teacher Cyan said that she lied to her husband that she didn't love him anymore because he was mean to her.
Explanation: We use the past tense of the verb for actions that happened in the past.

Chloe: I wanted to throw the christmas tree in his face but she said it was 7feet tall so too bad.
Correction: I wanted to throw the christmas tree in his face but she said it was 7 feet tall so too bad.
Explanation: Don't forget proper spacing. You can also make another sentence in saying 'Too bad'.

 

Hi Chloe,
Thank you for doing the homework. I had fun reading this even though we've talked about this in the class. I didn't throw the Santa though. It was outside the house and there were dogs. ^_^

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