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How to help somewone who is addicted to video games
작성자 : shi*** · 2016-01-07
Recently, many people are addicted to video games. When I read books, I can read that there are friends who are addicted to video games. I can help them.
1. If they are our friends, we can persuade them to go and play outside instead of just playing video games. You have to make them think that playing outside is much joyful than playing video games.
2. There is another way. We can suggest them to resist to playing games. First day, we suggest them to play just for 3~4hours. Then, the next day, you suggest for 2~3hours. Like that, you slowly crease them.
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How can we help someone who is addicted to video games?
Recently, many people have become addicted to video games. When I read a book, I have learned that there are friends who are addicted to video games. We can help them in some ways.
1. If they are our friends, we can persuade them to go and play outside instead of just playing video games. You have to make them think that playing outside is more joyful than playing video games.
2. There is another way. We can suggest them to resist the temptation of playing games. We can suggest them to play for just 3-4 hours on the first few days. Then, it could be for just 2-3 hours. With that, you are gradually reducing the time spent on playing video games.
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