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Music can heal people
작성자 : shi*** · 2016-01-05
<Music can heal people>
I think Music can heal people's mind.
First, When we hear classic music, we can be relaxed. So when we are angry, sad, or excited too much, we can hear classic music and calm our mood. My mom listened Classic music this morning and she was calmed, and I can concentrate more at my study.
Second, when we want to be more excited, we can listen to a rock music or an exciting music. I read about it. When friends came to a birthday party, they were gloomy. However when a boy turned on the CD Player and the rock music went on, they became joyful and had a fun Party.
Like that I guess music can change people's mood and also they can heal their mind and mental problems.
I think Music can heal people's mind.
First, When we hear classic music, we can be relaxed. So when we are angry, sad, or excited too much, we can hear classic music and calm our mood. My mom listened Classic music this morning and she was calmed, and I can concentrate more at my study.
Second, when we want to be more excited, we can listen to a rock music or an exciting music. I read about it. When friends came to a birthday party, they were gloomy. However when a boy turned on the CD Player and the rock music went on, they became joyful and had a fun Party.
Like that I guess music can change people's mood and also they can heal their mind and mental problems.
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I think music can heal people's mind.
Listening to classical music makes us relaxed. So when we are angry, sad, or too much excited, we can listen to classical to soothe our mind. My mom listened classical music this morning and she suddenly calmed down, so I was able to concentrate more on studying.
Also, I have read that if we want to feel more energetic, we can listen to a rock song or any other exciting songs. When my friends came to a birthday party, they looked gloomy. However, when a boy turned on the CD Player and the rock music went on, they became joyful and eventually had fun. I guess music can change someone's mood and it can also heal minds and reduce mental stress.
Listening to classical music makes us relaxed. So when we are angry, sad, or too much excited, we can listen to classical to soothe our mind. My mom listened classical music this morning and she suddenly calmed down, so I was able to concentrate more on studying.
Also, I have read that if we want to feel more energetic, we can listen to a rock song or any other exciting songs. When my friends came to a birthday party, they looked gloomy. However, when a boy turned on the CD Player and the rock music went on, they became joyful and eventually had fun. I guess music can change someone's mood and it can also heal minds and reduce mental stress.