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Is revenge justified?
작성자 : mad*** · 2015-12-31
I don't think that revenge is justified.
Because, when we revenge to others, it means that we harms them.
But, think about it. If someone get mental impact or if someone hurt because of me, is that could be justified? So, revenge which harms other people cannot be justified in any reason.
In other words, we should try to talk calmly with others and forgive them instead of revenge.
Because, when we revenge to others, it means that we harms them.
But, think about it. If someone get mental impact or if someone hurt because of me, is that could be justified? So, revenge which harms other people cannot be justified in any reason.
In other words, we should try to talk calmly with others and forgive them instead of revenge.
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I don't think that revenge is justified because if we take revenge, we cause harm to others.
Come to think of it, if someone gets hurt physically or emotionally because of you, can it be justified? So, revenge which brings harm to others cannot be justified in any way.
In other words, we should try to talk calmly with others and forgive them instead of seeking revenge.
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