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Diary; My Christmas

작성자 : mad***   ·   2015-12-29

<Went to the Nampo Christmas Tree Festival>

On the christmas I went to the 'Nampo' to see the 'Christmas Tree Festival'. It always held in Nampo on every christmas. Anyway, I saw many pine trees which were decorated with lights and ornaments. Also, I saw many decorations that are shaped like deer, sled and angel. They were really beautiful and dramatic.
And I also charity to the a charity pot. I felt great and proud when I just put my money into the charity pot. Because, I was just happy that I could help poor people and sharing my mind.
Anyway, it was really fantastic christmas. I hope that I could spend next christmas happy as this christmas.

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<Went to the Nampo Christmas Tree Festival>

On Christmas, I went to the "Nampo" to see the "Christmas Tree Festival" . It is always held in Nampo every Christmas. Anyway, I saw many pine trees which were decorated with lights and ornaments. Also, I saw many decorations that were shaped like a deer, a sled and an angel. They were really beautiful and dramatic. And I also gave to charity. I felt great and proud when I just put my money into the charity pot. Because, I was just happy that I could help poor people by sharing what I have
By the way, it was really a fantastic Christmas. I hope that I could spend my next Christmas as happy as this one.
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