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작성자 : k11*** · 2015-12-29
I had party with my uncle's family.
We ate steak and pasta.
my uncle gaves me slipper also i gave present to zoe.I gave a little pouch to her. my dad gave me a backpack i really like that
We ate steak and pasta.
my uncle gaves me slipper also i gave present to zoe.I gave a little pouch to her. my dad gave me a backpack i really like that
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My uncle's family and I had a party.
We ate steak and pasta.
My uncle gave me a pair of slippers. Also, I gave Zoe a present. I gave her a little pouch. My dad gave me a backpack, I really like it.
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