I had a very nice Christmas this year. I woke up early, then I headed to the living room to open my presents. The gift Santa gave me was a monopoly board game. I was glad because that was actually the upgraded version of it!
My cousin and my grandmother who came to our house on Christmas Eve got underwears while my father and mother got perfumes from me. I was glad because those were secret presents. I told my parents instead  that I was going to donate  give some money as Christmas presents. That was the worthiest thing I have ever done on Christmas  for more than a decade. 
We planned to watch a movie, but we watched TV too much and was really tired to watch another movie again. So, we gave up that movie instead of watching, we played Monopoly. Also, we lighted a firecracker and blasted it like a rocket in the evening. This was the nicest Christmas I ever had. I hope 12th that the next Christmas will be more joyful.

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