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PUZZLES

작성자 : hj0***   ·   2015-12-24

There are many kinds of puzzles.
First, there is a Sliding puzzle.
Sliding puzzles do not have any pieces.
Instead you can push little pictures to make a bigger picture.
There is a kinds of puzzle that is called Birdge and Battle sheep too.
There is many chrecles and you put a line.
Also there is Jigsaw puzzle, Sudoku, Cacuro, Picross(nemorosik) and Cube.
I like Sliding puzzle, Jigsaw puzzle and cube.
I like Sliding puzzle because when you push a picture, it will feel good.
I think you can finish it easily, too.
And I like Jigsaw puzzle because if you finish it you will be very happy.
The reason I like cube is I saw my sister do it and I looks fun.

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CORRECTION/S:

There are many kinds of puzzles. 
First, there is a sliding puzzle.
Sliding puzzles do not have any pieces. Instead you can push little pictures to make a bigger picture. There is a kind of puzzle that is called Bridge and Battleship too. There are many circles and you will have to put a line. There is also Jigsaw puzzle, Sudoku, Cacuro, Picross (nemorosik) and Cube.
I like Sliding puzzle, Jigsaw puzzle and Cube.
I like Sliding puzzle because when you push a picture, it will feel good.
I think you can finish it easily, too. I like Jigsaw puzzle because if you finish it you will be very happy. The reason I like cube is I saw my sister do it and it looked fun.

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