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My shopping

작성자 : k11***   ·   2015-12-22

I went shopping to marcket for buy my boots
first i went to shop call collete.
i bought boots for winter,it was happy shopping with my daddy

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CORRECTIONS:

I went shopping to the market to buy boots.
First, I bought the so called "collete" .
I bought boots for winter, it was a happy shopping with my daddy.

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