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작성자 : zek*** · 2015-12-22
My favorite story book is ...
i dont have one.I have many
Nobles I like many of the Nobles.
but story book isnt fun.
because in storey book,theres no intrusting part.
i dont have one.I have many
Nobles I like many of the Nobles.
but story book isnt fun.
because in storey book,theres no intrusting part.
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My favorite story book is...
I don't have one. I have many novel and I like a lot of novels.
But story book isn't fun.
Because in story book, there's no interesting part.
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