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작성자 : jiw***   ·   2015-12-18

My last movie is 'Intern'. This movie is about an old man who is intern in a company which consists of young people and the coming generation's program. At first, he can't mix well with other employees, but he always helps other people and give advices to young people with his experiences of life an finally he can be a real friend for each employees. Also he contributes to company in many ways. After watching this movie, I realized that age doesn't matter when we live our lives and the society can be changed by not only new things but also old things.

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The last movie I've seen was the movie,'Intern'. This movie is about an old man who becomes a senior intern in a company of young professionals. At first, he doesn't mix well with other employees, but he always helps others and give pieces of advice to them based on his previous experiences. He eventually became friends with all his colleagues. He also has contributed to the company in many different ways. After watching this movie, I've realized that age doesn't affect the way we live our lives. Also, the society can be changed not only by new things, but old things as well.


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