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robot world: I hope not

작성자 : joj***   ·   2015-12-17

If robots take over the world, Ithink terrible things will happen. Because in the robots head there things that the scientists garner away things that the robit needs. But if they take over and if we do that there is not in the robot head the robot will put us in jail or worse kill us. So I think robots should not take over the world.But there is also a good thing too. Robots are smart and they are made of in metal or other strong things. So when there is a war the robots will go out in the war and win. And that's the good thing and Ithink the rest of them are bed things. Ihope this don't come's true because if the robots take over the world the world will be full of robots!!!!

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If robots take over the world, I think terrible things will happen. Because a robot is controlled by a chip implanted in its brain.
So, if they take over robots might lose control and put us in prison or even worse kill us. So I think we shouldn't allow robots to take over the world. However, robots are smart and they are made of in metals. So, if ever there's a war, robots will fight and win the war for us. That's the only good thing about it. But, I hope this doesn't come true. If so, the world will be full of robots!!!!




 

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