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What are the Positive and Negative effects of Technology in the Future?
작성자 : mad*** · 2015-12-15
[Positive effects of technology in the future]
1. It would make our life more comfortable.
2. It would help us to conduct our tasks.
3. It would protect us from certain hackers and would improve security system.
[Negative effects of technology in the future]
1. The future's technology may become more complex than today's technology so,
it would be hard to use and adapt in the future's technology.
2. There would be many cyber and internet fraud which are require high-tech
so, people may be decived by the fraud.
1. It would make our life more comfortable.
2. It would help us to conduct our tasks.
3. It would protect us from certain hackers and would improve security system.
[Negative effects of technology in the future]
1. The future's technology may become more complex than today's technology so,
it would be hard to use and adapt in the future's technology.
2. There would be many cyber and internet fraud which are require high-tech
so, people may be decived by the fraud.
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CORRECTION/S:
1. It would make our lives more comfortable.
2. It would help us conduct our tasks.
3. It would protect us from certain hackers and would improve the security system.
[Negative effects of technology in the future]
1. The future's technology may become more complex than today's technology so it would be hard to use and adapt to the future's technology.
2. There would be much cyber and internet fraud which would require high-technology so people may be deceived by the fraud.
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