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작성자 : skk***   ·   2015-12-14

Hot, hot, hot! I'm so hot!But my mom saids it's so cold today! It's so strange.
It's only 5 Celsius today! My mom saids that I feel the heat very much.
Now, very strangly, I have a little cold. Fortunately, I have a little cold,so I could go to the school and institutes. It is a little luck to me. I wish that recover my health!

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hot, hot, hot! I feel so hot. But my mom said, it's so cold today! That's strange.
The temperature is only 5 celsius today. My mom said that I have heat intolerance because I could feel it very much. Now, that sounds stranger than the first one. Fortunately, I only have a little cold, so I could still go to the school and institutes. I am still lucky. I hope to feel better soon.


 



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