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Computer's advantages
1.We can do many programs and games in computer.
2.We can do photoshop and also writing.
Computer's disadvatages
1.It has many promblems like computers moniter goes down,or computer became too slow.
2.Some people could not go out and only do computer.
1.We can do many programs and games in computer.
2.We can do photoshop and also writing.
Computer's disadvatages
1.It has many promblems like computers moniter goes down,or computer became too slow.
2.Some people could not go out and only do computer.
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Computer's advantages
1.We can do many programs and games in computer.
> We can use many programs and play games in computer.
2. We can do photoshop and also writing.
> We can do Photoshop and also writing.
Computer's disadvatages
> Computer's disadvantages
1.It has many promblems like computers moniter goes down,or computer became too slow.
> It has many problems such as, the monitor of the computer goes down, or the computer becomes too slow.
2.Some people could not go out and only do computer.
> Some people could not go out and only use the computer.