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작성자 : k11***   ·   2015-12-04

I bough my new gloves for winter.
Today I will watch circus with my friend.
I remote the Robot use by remotcontrol.
My bag is enough with books.
My uncle's face is covered with bearded.
people is always using a transportation.

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CORRECTION/S:

I bought new gloves for winter.

Today I will watch the circus with my friend.
I used the robot with the remote control.
My bag is filled with books.
My uncle's face is covered with beard.
People are always using different means of transportation.

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