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작성자 : diz***   ·   2015-11-29

1. Doctors tell us that people are living too fast. Traffic statistics show they are dying the same way.

I thnk that this sentence is a funny joke. Everyone meet their death equally under the traffic system.
Various tools change and influence our lives. They make our lives conveniently, but the risk increases, too. We want to go fast, it can be dangerous. When we drive the car and cross the road, we have to watch many things. And sometimes even if we are careful, we can have a accident. In other words, we exchanged the safe for the speed and convenience.

Thank you!

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1. Doctors tell us that people are living too fast. Traffic statistics show they are dying the same way.

I think that this sentence is a funny joke. Everyone meets their death equally under traffic disasters/ accidents.
Various tools change and influence our lives. They make our lives conveniently, but the risk increases, too. We want to go fast, but it can be dangerous. When we drive a car and cross the road, we have to watch many things. And Sometimes even if we are careful, we can still meet an accident. In other words, we exchange the  safety for the speed and convenience .

Thank you!
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