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작성자 : kdh*** · 2015-11-24
The most influencial place is my school.
It is beacause school can change my life.
It makes me to sucess or fail.
This is why school is my most influencial place.
It is beacause school can change my life.
It makes me to sucess or fail.
This is why school is my most influencial place.
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The most influencial place for me is my school beacause school can change your life.
It makes will help me sucess succeed or fail.
This is why school is the most influencial place for me.
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