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A story about girl who has a pet bird.
작성자 : hj0*** · 2015-11-23
Cody,who has a bird named Lamila,has a twin brother named Coby.
And Coby has a bird named Jam. Cody said "Your bird is named Jam? are you nuts?'
Coby said "Whatever" He was in a bad mood.
One day,They saw an eag in the cage. It was out of nowhere.
They was wide-eyed.The eag caught their eye.
They put two and two togeter and they realize it was Lamila"s eag!!!
Cody was very happy so she gave Lamila some seeds and happly went to bed.
HAPPY ENDENG!
(Cody is a girl!!!!)
And Coby has a bird named Jam. Cody said "Your bird is named Jam? are you nuts?'
Coby said "Whatever" He was in a bad mood.
One day,They saw an eag in the cage. It was out of nowhere.
They was wide-eyed.The eag caught their eye.
They put two and two togeter and they realize it was Lamila"s eag!!!
Cody was very happy so she gave Lamila some seeds and happly went to bed.
HAPPY ENDENG!
(Cody is a girl!!!!)
답변
A story about a girl who has a pet bird.
Cody, has a bird named Lamila, and he has a twin brother named Coby.
And Coby has a bird named Jam. Cody said "You named your bird Jam? Are you nuts?'
Coby said "Whatever" He was in a bad mood.
One day, They saw an egg in the cage. It was out of nowhere.
They were wide-eyed. The egg caught their eye.
They put two and two together and they realize it was Lamila's egg!!!
Cody was very happy so she gave Lamila some seeds and happily went to bed.
HAPPY ENDING!
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