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Are friends important to you?

작성자 : pol***   ·   2015-11-23

Q,





Are friends important to you?




A,





Yes, they are.





Because when i'm sad, they make me happy.





And, when im board, they play with me.





Plus, when i need help, they help me.





Lastly, when i'm happy, my friends make me happy more.




Thank you for see my homework!





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- DONE -

답변

Q. Are friends important to you?

A.
Yes, they are.
Because when I'm sad, they make me happy.
And, when I'm bored, they play with me.
Plus, when I need help, they help me.
Lastly, when I'm happy, my friends make me happier.


Thank you for checking my homework!

- THE END -

- DONE -

 

POINTS TO IMPROVE:
1. Spacing (Note: You don't have to use a lot of spacing when you write your homework )
2. Capitalization
3. Word Choice


THANK YOU FOR DOING YOUR HOMEWORK LARA!

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