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작성자 : kwa***   ·   2015-11-19

I understand some of their feelings. They might want to hide in somewhere or cry, maybe... Other children may know too, because they should have gone through that kind of situations- feeling embarrassed cause of their parents. They are just poor people who involved into the situation that they didn’t want. To me, these are all I know now because I can’t really sympathy them, I don’t think about their feelings, I just know the ones I really experienced in my life. These are all, nothing more.

PS: I really can’t think of how they feel!!!

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I understand some of their feelings how they feel. They might want to hide in somewhere or cry, maybe... Other children may know too because they have already gone through that those kinds of situations,?feeling embarrassed because of their parents. They are just poor people who got involved into?a situation that they don't want to find themselves in. To me, these are all I know now. I can't really sympathize with?them because I don't think about what their feelings are. I just know the ones that?I really have already experienced. That is all. There is nothing more I can say.



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