회원가입 로그인

학습방

원어민 일대일 맞춤 회화 수업 토크펀! 영어 정복의 꿈을 이루세요!

영작문첨삭

homework

작성자 : mad***   ·   2015-11-17

If I get a treasure map that is marked where treasure is, I will go to a advanture to find treasure with my friends who like advantures.
Firstly, advanture per se that is fun. It means, that I like to explore and advanture to find or acheive something.
Also, even if the map is fake, it(the advanture) would remain to me as a good experience.
These are the reasons why I want to go to a advanture if I get a treasure map.

답변

If I get a treasure map that is marked where the treasure is, I will go on an adventure to find it with my friends who like adventures too.
Firstly, adventures per se is fun. It means that I like to explore and go on adventures to find or achieve something.
Also, even if the map is fake, it (the adventure) would remain to me as a good experience.
These are the reasons why I want to go on an adventure if I get a treasure map.

Hi, Alex. I like your idea and I agree that it is fun.
Anyway, please check my corrections above. Be mindful of the following:

(x) advanture ~> adventure
(x) acheive ~> achieve
(x) go to a adventure ~> go on an adventure

목록으로