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작성자 : sil***   ·   2015-11-18

Yesterday was very enjoy day to me.
It's because i met my friends last night.
So I hung out with my friends. We haven't seen for a long time.
So, We talked our life and family.
Also, we had much foods and alcoholic drinks.
It was impressive food that we had foods lastnignt is fried bean sprouts with maat.
It was good with bear.
So, I thinked whenever i will back here with my wife, and try to eat this food.
We did hit the ball in game center like a baseball player.
I hit the 7th ball in 12th of total.
My friend hit 4fh in 12th of total. Another friend hit the 6th in 12th of total.
I won this game.
After the game , We went to for drink again.
It was time 2 A.M . Then my phone was called from wife.
my wife was very angry. So I got back home hurry.
It was 3:30 AM when i reached at home.
So. Today is so tierd...

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Yesterday I had a very enjoyable  day to me.
It's because I met my friends last night.
So I hung out with my friends. We haven't seen for a long time.
So, We talked about our life and family.
Also, we had much foods and alcoholic drinks.
It was impressive food that we had foods eaten last night it was  fried bean sprouts with maat.
It was good with beer.
So, I thinked thought whenever I will back here with my wife, and try to eat this food.
We did hit the ball in game center like a baseball player.
I hit the 7th  seven balls in 12th of for the total of twelve balls .
My friend hit 4fh four balls in 12th of total for the total of twelve balls .
Another friend hit the six balls out of twelve balls.
I won the game.
After the game , We went to for drink again.
It was time 2 A.M . Then my phone was called I got a phone call from wife.
my wife was very angry. So I got back home hurry.
It was 3:30 AM when I reached at home.
So. Today I was so tired tierd...

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