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작성자 : hj0*** · 2015-11-17
Bella and her mom are having a dialogue.(phone call)
Bella=Hi,mom! I am in a hurry to eat food!
Mom=Oh!Just in time! I am shoping now. What do you want?
Bella=I like apples. Ready for take off!
Mom=Bella?
Bella= Oh, i am playing with my friend.By,mom! Get my apple!
Mom= Okay,By,Bella!
Bella=Hi,mom! I am in a hurry to eat food!
Mom=Oh!Just in time! I am shoping now. What do you want?
Bella=I like apples. Ready for take off!
Mom=Bella?
Bella= Oh, i am playing with my friend.By,mom! Get my apple!
Mom= Okay,By,Bella!
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CORRECTION/S:
Bella=Hi,mom! I am in a hurry to eat food!
Mom=Oh! Just in time! I am shopping now. What do you want?
Bella=I like apples. Ready for take off!
Mom=Bella?
Bella= Oh, I am playing with my friend. Bye,mom! Get my apple!
Mom= Okay, bye, Bella!
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