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작성자 : sey***   ·   2015-11-17

hello~!! happy tuesday...
But...i'm mad!!!!!!!!!
because ... soon - my sister's birthday ( so I should spend my money for present!!! OMG ... )
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anyway... you give me a homework~!!^^
- Who is the person you admire most? Make an essay about this person.
um....ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
wow...
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1. Marie Curie
- Marie Curie is a scientist. She was a woman. At that time, people doesn't think woman can be got a Nobel Prize. And,,,she got a Nobel Prize. Even when her husband dead she still doing research! ( I'm sorry, I think my grammar skill is bad ) My dream is New renewable Energy researcher. And I'm woman. If I study,study,study, and try and try maybe I can get a Nobel Prize . Of course if I study hard...( strange dream. I know... ) And Marie Curie is a first woman who got a Nobel Prize...That's why I admire her.

2. Sejong the Great.
- Do you know him?? Maybe not. He is a person who was king. He made a korean alphabet (Hangul) even he has many disease. There is a funny thing. The one of the reason Sejong the Great dead,, - fat
,,, he was fat...!

3. dry mango.
- I admire dry mango. Because it is delicious !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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bye~!!!
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           1. Marie Curie
- Marie Curie is a scientist. She was is a woman. At that time, people doesn't didn't think a woman can be got could get a Nobel Prize. And,,,she got a Nobel Prize. Even when her husband dead  had died, she still continued doing research! ( I'm sorry, I think my grammar skill is bad ) My dream is to be  a New Renewable Energy Researcher. And I'm a woman. If I study,study,study, and try and try maybe I can get a Nobel Prize . Of course if I study hard...( strange dream. I know... ) And Marie Curie is a the first woman who got a Nobel Prize...That's why I admire her.

2. Sejong the Great.
- Do you know him?? Maybe not. He is a person who was a king. He made a the Korean alphabet (Hangul) even he has had many diseases. There is a funny thing. The One of the reason why Sejong the Great dead died,, - fat ,,, he was fat...!

3. dry dried mangoes.
- I admire dry dried mangoes. Because it is They are delicious !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


 


 

Thank you for doing your homework, Claire! 

Be mindful of the following:

1. Use of articles

2. Verb tenses

 

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