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My family dessert.....
작성자 : hee*** · 2015-11-16
My family dessert is fruit and yogurt.Wich do I like more?
I can't decide.I like both.Yesterday my mom gave me milk with hemp and honey.
My mom said "It's helpful for your health."But it tastes bad.
I can't decide.I like both.Yesterday my mom gave me milk with hemp and honey.
My mom said "It's helpful for your health."But it tastes bad.
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CORRECTION/S:
I can't decide, I like both.Yesterday my mom gave me milk with hemp and honey. My mom said "it's helpful for your health" but it tasted bad.
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* Verb tenses
* Possessive nouns
* Sentence completion