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작성자 : jie***   ·   2015-11-16

I like Singapore more. Because there are very pretty buildings and it's more unfamiliar to me. I like Universal studio most in Singapore. Because it's the most fun place in the world to me!

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I like Singapore more because of the very pretty buildings and it's more unfamiliar to me. I like Universal Studio the most in Singapore because it's the most fun place in the world to me!

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