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작성자 : diz***   ·   2015-11-17

Why haven't the problems associated with automobile usage been corrected?

I think this question means why people couldn't be solved this problems until recently. Is it right?

I think that cars are increasing dramatically for short of time. And the car companies tried to minimize the problems associated with cars. They advertised only good side. The govermment also did that.

These days everyone tries to handle this problem. Car problems are big influence on people's daily life. We needs to look at this problems from a wider perspective because many things related that.

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CORRECTION/S:


I think this question means why people couldn't be solve this these problems up until recently. Is it right?

I think that there has been a dramatic increase in the number of cars. Although the car companies have already tried to minimize the problems associated with cars, they only advertise the good side. The govermment also did the same thing.

These days everyone tries to handle this problem. Car problems are big influence has a large impact on people's daily life lives. We need to look at this problem from a wider perspective because many things are related to it.

BE MINDFUL OF THE FOLLOWING:


Sentence completion
Word choice
Subject-Verb agreement
Sentence construction.

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