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Homework(What are the things you do when you celebrate the birthday of one of your family members? Give at least three activities?

작성자 : man***   ·   2015-11-13

My father gave a sharp and four cloer pen and eraser.
My sister gave a pencil case.
My mom gave she's love.

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CORRECTION/S:

My father gave me a sharpener, four pens and an eraser.

My sister gave me a pencil case.
My mom gave me her love.

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* Plural nouns
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