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작성자 : lcy***   ·   2015-11-11

The school camp
I go school by bus
I eat juice and snack
At school camp
I learn about leadership
And I beat the drum
I climb stone wall
My friend is third
But I'm last
It is very hard

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CORRECTION/S:

Here are the things I had  in my recent school camp:

1. I went to school by bus.
2. I had some juice and some snacks.
3. I learned about leadership.
4. I learned how to beat drums.
5. I climbed on a man-made stone wall. My friend made it on the third and I was the last. It was really difficult.

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