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my favorite shirts
작성자 : cin*** · 2015-11-11
My favorite shirts is ink and T-shirts
This shirts my mom bought it
This shirts is pretty and comfortable.
So I like it.
This shirts my mom bought it
This shirts is pretty and comfortable.
So I like it.
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Hi Cindy! Thank you for writing about your favorite shirts. 
Here are some corrections:
My favorite shirts is ink and T-shirts have print on it.
This shirts are bought by my mom. bought it
This shirts is are pretty and comfortable.
So I like it them.
Points to improve:
>Use of period (.)
>Verb
>Pronoun