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작성자 : gjt*** · 2015-11-11
First, I wake up 7:30 almost everyday and take a shower for 15minutes.
I go to school at 8:00 or 8:05 because our school have to go before 8:20.
At 12:30 I have lunch in cafetaria.
After school I go to academy or private lesson.
And then I have a dinner.After that I do my homework.
I go to school at 8:00 or 8:05 because our school have to go before 8:20.
At 12:30 I have lunch in cafetaria.
After school I go to academy or private lesson.
And then I have a dinner.After that I do my homework.
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CORRECTION/S:
I wake up at 7:30 and take a shower for 14 minutes everyday. I go to school at 8:00 because we are obliged to come before 8:20. At lunch break, I take my lunch at the cafeteria at 12:30. Then in the afternoon, I go and attend some private lessons in some academies. Last, I take my dinner and do my homework in the evening.