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작성자 : diz*** · 2015-11-11
You know what? In korea, today is a Pepero day. For days, a lot of Pepero were sold throughout the country.
Anyway, I think the 'get' and ' give' is very close together.
What we give makes Wwhat we get. So if we talk about the 'get', We need to think about the 'give'.
And this sentence talks the worth of ourselves. How can we measure people's ones? I think it depends on change other peoples. The only thing what we make change person is give our time, our attention and love.
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We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give.
You know what? In Korea, today is a Pepero day. For days, a lot of Pepero were sold throughout the country.
Anyway, I think the 'get' and ' give' is very close together have almost or similar meaning. What we give makes what we get We make a life by what we give. So, if we want to get something, we also need to think about giving something. This is about worth of how we value each individual. How can we measure people's ones?>>>(What do you mean by this?)
I think it differs from person to person depends on change other peoples. The only thing what we can give to make a person change is to give our time, our attention, and love.
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