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작성자 : k11*** · 2015-11-09
I am client of the store.
This story is sincere story.
I saw famous actor at the street.
The giant mosquito bite my leg.
Russia is biggest country in globe.
This story is sincere story.
I saw famous actor at the street.
The giant mosquito bite my leg.
Russia is biggest country in globe.
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I am the client in the store.
This story is sincere.
I saw a famous actor at the street.
The giant mosquito bite my leg.
Russia is the biggest country in globe.
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Good job, Ann! Keep it up. 