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작성자 : skk*** · 2015-11-09
When I was 9 years old, I got many presents.
From mom, I got trampoline and long books series. From dad, I got desk lamp.
From my friends, I a mini Van Gogh picture,'Starry Night', snacks, etc.
From mom, I got trampoline and long books series. From dad, I got desk lamp.
From my friends, I a mini Van Gogh picture,'Starry Night', snacks, etc.
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CORRECTION/S:
When I was 9 years old, I have gotten many presents.
I got trampoline and book series from my Mom.
I got a desk lamp from my Dad.
I got a mini Van Gogh picture, 'Starry Night', snacks, etc. from my friends.
Things to improve on:
>tenses
>choices of words
>sentence construction
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