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작성자 : amy***   ·   2015-11-04

THE GOLDEN BELL
FROM{Amy}
We did golden bell on wednessday.Golden bell is a project.First we need to read english books.[the book teacher commands us to read]Then days later a teacher make questions.If our answer is correct we need to answer another...another....and another until only one person lefts.Then that person rings the golden bell.But if your answer is incorrect you go to the back of the stage and wait until the last person rings the golden bell.
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TO{all my love to Lizzy teacher}

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CORRECTION/S:

THE GOLDEN BELL

We had this special activity in our English class called Golden Bell on Wednesday. Before this day, we were given a number of days to prepare. First, we needed to read the English book recommended/provided by our teacher. We had to comprehend the story keenly for we will be asked to answer some questions on the day of the Golden Bell which is what already happened earlier. Our teacher asked us one by one until only e person remained. This person remaining will be the one to ring the golden bell. However, if the person gave incorrect answers, he or she needed to start again by going back to the stage and then wait until the last person rings it again. It was quite challeging but it was fun and I learned a lot from this game.

Thank you so much for doing your homework, Amy.

I LOVE YOU!

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