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작성자 : a96***   ·   2015-11-04

The safest transportation that I think is airplane. Because airplane has safety
packs for falling, and it also not fall very well.If the weather is not good,
the airplanes do not take off for safety.

The dangerous transportation that I think is car cause cars are many so it can
be crash well. And also it has only airback and it has only at the front seat.

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For me, flying is the safest mode of transportation that I think is airplane. Because airplane has safety
packs for falling, and it also not fall very well.
 (<<<<Do you mean parachutes? Only aircrafts have parachutes, not on domestic flights ) If the weather is not good,
the airplanes do not take off for safety flight is cancelled.

The dangerous mode of transportation, that I think, is car because cars are many so it can
be crash well
there might be an accident in bumper-to-bumper, rush hour, or slow moving traffic. And also, it has only airback airbags are and it has only at in the front seat of a car.

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