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작성자 : diz***   ·   2015-11-03

After all, life is really simple; we ourselves create the circumstances that complicate it.

I agree with that partly.

I think that everything happen in order of time. But the works arise on a grand scale. So we can't figure out whole the process.
We are faced with many misunderstanding. We don't want to be foolish, so we don't ask other person and we don't express ourselves enough. That makes the complcate situation.

I think we should accept that we don't know that much and we should be honest.


Thank you!

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After all, life is really simple; we, ourselves, create the circumstances that complicate it.


I agree with that partly. 

I think that everything happens in order of time. But the works arise on a grand scale. So we can't figure out the whole process.
We are faced with many misunderstandings. We don't want to be foolish, so we don't ask other people and we don't express ourselves enough. That complicates the situation. 

I think we should accept the fact that we don't know that much and we should be honest.


Thank you!

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