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My hobby.

작성자 : kim***   ·   2015-11-02

I like play basketball.I started when I was 3 grade.
I think it is a good exercise.and i like Michael Jorden.That is how I started my hobby.And my hobby is special my hobby.because Iam happy when I shoot a ball.
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CORRECTION/S:

I like playing basketball. I started playing it when I was in third grade. I like it because it's a good exercise and I like Michael Jordan. This is how I started loving this sport. Moreover, I find it so special that I feel happy when I play it especially when I shoot the ball perfectly on the ring.

THANK YOU, Ariel Kim! :)

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